Hi Sateki I am Alvin from YMS I really like your blog the heading is very good that makes me want to read more about it but the link didn't work to your side so you might need to work on that and also you sould add some questions so that will make you blog much more intresting but other than that great job!
Kia Ora Sateki I am Olivia from Yaldhurst Model SChool your heading is really interesting and it pulled me into seeing this blog so I think that was really good maybe next time you could perhaps add more detail on the top about and the blog like add some clues of what the poster will be like and adding some detail that will get people interested to click on the link but disappointment :( 😭 I can't even see the poster sad it said acess denied it means that I can'accesss it :( 😭 What is the poster about Kind regards Olivia B
Hi Sateki I am Alvin from YMS I really like your blog the heading is very good that makes me want to read more about it but the link didn't work to your side so you might need to work on that and also you sould add some questions so that will make you blog much more intresting but other than that great job!
ReplyDeleteHi there Sateki, My name is Abby and I am a year 8 student at Yaldhurst Model School.
ReplyDeleteI like how you have the topic and the date. Also how you talked about that you learnt about Earthworms.
This reminds me of some reading I did a couple of years ago that talks all about different things.
Next time you could try embedding the poster. Since it's not working. Maybe ask a friend or someone else that knows how to do it if you don't.
Whats your favourite thing about earthworms?
Kind regards,
Abby.
Kia Ora Sateki I am Olivia from Yaldhurst Model SChool
ReplyDeleteyour heading is really interesting and it pulled me into seeing this blog so I think that was really good maybe next time you could perhaps add more detail on the top about and the blog like add some clues of what the poster will be like and adding some detail that will get people interested to click on the link but disappointment :( 😭 I can't even see the poster sad it said acess denied it means that I can'accesss it :( 😭
What is the poster about
Kind regards Olivia B
Kia Ora I'm Jorja from Yaldhurst Model School.
ReplyDeleteI liked the way you have added a link to your poster.
Did you think about adding a photo of Earthworms.
Next time, you could add a photo of Earthworms.
Kind Regards Jorja.