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Friday, July 27, 2018

Moment in time.

Learning goal

  1. We are learning TO USE OUR SENSES to describe what we think is happening in the photo.
  2. We are learning to use WOW! words like adjectives and verbs to add impact for our audience (people who read our writing).



The most terrifing moment in my life

I heard the birds squawking in the air while I was riding down the zipline.
I saw the snake creeping and wiggling through the mud trying to catch its prey.
I felt like the zipline was momentarily about to collapse at any moment, I would fall to my death without any protection.
I wonder if my body will survive and not be the snakes next victim.









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