Saint Pius X feast day.

Name - Sateki                                                21/8/18

We are learning TO USE OUR SENSES to describe what we think is happening

in the photo.

We are learning to use WOW! words like adjectives and verbs to add impact

for our audience (people who read our writing).

Draft 3

Title: A careful celebration.

I  saw the crowd of blessed and happy students with little crumbs of cake and powder on their faces.  

I heard the sound of delight and delectable coming from
different parts of the hall.

I felt the touch of the marvelous dessert.

I wondered if I could cut the mouth-watering treat next year.

Draft 2

I saw the Icy and frosty cake on the tables.

I heard the noisy crowd storming in with delight.

I felt the soggyish cake in my hand.

I wondered if I can cut the cake next year.

Draft 3.

I saw a nice spongy cake with tiny bits of powder.

I heard people eating their cake.

I felt happy and excited to eat my cake.

I wondered in Pope Pius was there.

The sunshine coasts of Hastings.

A Trip to Hastings.

There I was unpacking my stuff from driving to Hastings all the way from Auckland.
I burst out with exhaustion and sweat all over my face. As I lay down on the grass acting
like I was a dead dog.

The next day I felt better like a bear with honey in his hands all day.
I went to go cook some breakfast when suddenly there was loud pounding on the door it felt like it was shaking the whole house like an earthquake. But actually, it was my relatives that
flew here at 9:00.

Finally, my plate was done and I went for a shower to get ready for the BBQ 3:00 cause
I want to play Fortnite longer than having to take a shower before we go I will just have
to wait for my siblings and the rest of the crew.

After the feed, I kinda enjoyed the feed cause there were lots of new families to meet.
In my case of seeing them, I had a lot of fun getting to know them and their personalities.
We also had a game of basketball and my team won the whole tournament, obviously.

That night we went to the funeral and sadness in my heart broke me. All the tears are saw were so sad I felt like I wanted to cry all day and all night. I couldn’t say a word my mouth was
speechless, you could see tiny pebbles of tears on my face and all the sad faces and
tears I saw made me feel like it was just a rainy day.

                                                                                     

Just the next morning I woke up and did the usual. After everything was finished chores done and cleaned I sat back and relaxed while playing Fortnite. ( 3rd place solo ) Still improving in
this game maybe I’ll come first next time.

During the afternoon I went back to the main house for the parents to have a meeting.
But I went to go watch a movie in a room, Suddenly there were no movies to watch because
I watched them all so I went to the kitchen to eat some Keke.

The next day we were going back to Auckland, So we went to the main house where my mum was early in the morning. I hate early days but I have to just go with the flow and had to do what I was told.

There we were going back to Auckland while on the other hand I just sleep, sleep and sleep
the whole way there while throwing up (cause I stayed till 3:00 in the morning.)

Typing.

I am practicing my typing so I can be quicker and more accurate.

This will help me finish my work faster.

Today

Last week.

Analysis

I have gotten faster at my typing but that doesn't mean that I have to stop cause I want to get faster than my friend's cause I'm a competitive person.

Saint Vincent de Paul

My Saint is Vincent de Paul he was born on 24th April 1841 and died during the 27th of September
1660. He was a very helpful and kind man who cared for others and what they had to say. He was a
French Catholic priest who cared for the poor. He was canonized in 1707 and was the founder of the congregation of the mission and daughters of Saint Vincent de Paul.

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